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Elusive quarry indeed.
Bright-faced youths may scamper
Endlessly
Through sunlit meadows full of fluttering
And yet, at end of day, return tired
Nets empty
But eager to try again, as children are.
What of those too old, or too slow?
They'll run too, or perhaps just watch.
The glittering prize, promised
And so often savoured in anticipation
Proves always out of reach.
Easy, after a while, to stop and rest.
Easy, later,
To forget those dappled hues and their dancing flight.
Retire, and pretend they never were.
Seek solace in other, greyer things.
Or remain forever haunted.
Gazing, maybe, at those more fortunate.
And in envy
Or in memory of sunny days long past
Their collections might sparkle yet.
Cold stillness belies their fate, in truth.
Dreams, pinned under glass.
Bright-faced youths may scamper
Endlessly
Through sunlit meadows full of fluttering
And yet, at end of day, return tired
Nets empty
But eager to try again, as children are.
What of those too old, or too slow?
They'll run too, or perhaps just watch.
The glittering prize, promised
And so often savoured in anticipation
Proves always out of reach.
Easy, after a while, to stop and rest.
Easy, later,
To forget those dappled hues and their dancing flight.
Retire, and pretend they never were.
Seek solace in other, greyer things.
Or remain forever haunted.
Gazing, maybe, at those more fortunate.
And in envy
Or in memory of sunny days long past
Their collections might sparkle yet.
Cold stillness belies their fate, in truth.
Dreams, pinned under glass.
One of my less cheerful works, but I like it. Besides, I did give fair warning: [link]
As ever, comments, criticism and reviews (not to mention lavish praise) are welcome and indeed encouraged. Please don't let my lack of a premium account stop you from critiquing my works - I assure you I can take it.
Incidentally, an Italian translation can be found here: [link]
As ever, comments, criticism and reviews (not to mention lavish praise) are welcome and indeed encouraged. Please don't let my lack of a premium account stop you from critiquing my works - I assure you I can take it.
Incidentally, an Italian translation can be found here: [link]
© 2010 - 2024 Mr-Howl
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I don't think it's whiny at all. And I L.O.V.E. the last line!
"Dreams pinned under glass." Wow.
"Dreams pinned under glass." Wow.